Music Video First Draft Feedback

As we were behind on filming for our first draft, it only last one minute and fourty seconds but we still decided to get some feedback on what we had already. Some of the constructive feedback we got is listed below:

• Needs more movement, most of the camera work is too static
• Needs more shots of the artist in the centre 
• More locations needed that fit the genre 
• Should use colour correction on some of the shots
• Cut shots out off stairs, doesn't fit with the rest of the video
• Use colour wall more in video